Haiku Vs Senryu
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why should I shatter
impeccable petaled-rose
when I know it's "NO".
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Forgetting my love
It's hard here within my heart
But it's fun in mind.
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HAIKU -------> she loves me not
SENRYU -------> hard but it's fun
Copyright © Jun-Jun Villanueva | Year Posted 2012
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