Haiku Peace

stars of amethyst swirling light circles path to perfect peace

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David Williams

Date: 9/18/2011 8:01:00 AM

Eiken love the peacefulness in this Haiku, thanks for your comments,..David

Eamon Duffin

Date: 4/13/2011 2:38:00 PM

Hi M. Another great vision in words. Eamon

James Fraser

Date: 4/1/2011 11:50:00 AM

There sure is a peacefulness to this Haiku Eiken, soothing also in a way. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/29/2011 4:46:00 PM

Eiken, very lovely imagery, love 'stars of amethyst' , enjoyed reading! Thanks for your congrats for "A Trip Out Of This World" win...so appreciated:) Carol

Eiken Laan

Date: 3/29/2011 10:48:00 AM

Thank you to all, especially Rick for giving me a space in this competition, really grateful for the lovely comments:))

Kash Poet

Date: 3/29/2011 9:32:00 AM

Wonderful write!Congrats Eiken on your wwin---kashinath

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/28/2011 6:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest with this serene Haiku, Eiken! Congratulations. Always, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/28/2011 12:49:00 PM

Congratulations on the 13th place win in the contest of Rick, Eiken

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2011 12:47:00 PM

Eiken, Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 3/28/2011 12:28:00 PM

Good to see your poem in the winner's circle Eiken. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success in Rick's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2011 12:05:00 PM

Congrats Eiken on your wonderful win in Rick's cool contest luv... an elegant entry to depict the photo presented for the contest full of great imagery luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2011 7:53:00 AM

Congratulations Eiken on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Haiku Beyond". Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2011 10:02:00 AM

Rick will enjoy the vivid description in this as much as I did, Eiken. Very creative! Best wishes for success in his contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2011 8:06:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Eiken. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/23/2011 6:12:00 AM

Beautiful read and interpretation of the picture in haiku with apt images, each line conveys a meaningful expression, Eiken

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 3/23/2011 5:37:00 AM

very beautiful and serene

Nick Bagnall

Date: 3/23/2011 5:06:00 AM

This paints beautiful image for me, well done