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Haiku Or Senryu

haiku or senryu doesn't matter I'm still alone

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2012 8:34:00 AM

Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments on my writings Susan. I hope to be reading your poetry for many years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 6/5/2012 11:34:00 AM

Oh wow this is such a strong write...I hope you don't have to stay like this for long...congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/5/2012 6:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Susan. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/4/2012 3:38:00 AM

cheers to you for this fine win, susan.. :) hugggs!

David Williams

Date: 6/4/2012 2:30:00 AM

Susan congrats on your win..David

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/4/2012 12:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!

Joseph May

Date: 6/3/2012 7:20:00 PM

very nice Susan...congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2012 6:23:00 PM

Love this one, Susan. I didn't quite know what I was doing for this contest but you captured what she was wanting! Congrats to you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/3/2012 6:11:00 PM

SUSAN, Congratulations with this enjoyable & Excellent entry! My contest was so much fun. I am so glad my senryu and haiku mix, contest did not fail, as I thought it would. ~always :-) PD

Joseph May

Date: 5/29/2012 7:55:00 AM

nice write Susan..thanks for stopping by..hugs...Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2012 6:49:00 PM

wow, DEEP one, Susan . How did I miss this?

Dinda Minardi

Date: 5/27/2012 9:02:00 AM

A loadful of sadness, Susan. My 'Birthday Suit' poem wasn't based on the true person. Sorry for the late reply, dear Susan. :)

Kathryn Collins

Date: 5/26/2012 9:04:00 AM

Wow. Hits hard. love, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2012 3:01:00 PM

One more friend - well done - oxox Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/22/2012 6:01:00 PM

We're here for you Susan! This is a perfect Senryu that you have written! I love this write tons! This is an amazing poem I have to say, especially the last line, excellent! Great Work!!

Nathan D.

Date: 5/22/2012 12:31:00 PM

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