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Haiku Number Eighteen

Note: Bing! I didn't forget the last word Red Orange yellow Green Blue Violet spectrum Somewhere over the

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/3/2009 6:09:00 AM
Makes us all say the word out loud when we get to the last line. Very clever! Michael
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Date: 2/2/2009 4:19:00 PM
Nice poem Deirdre, you're on fire with your haiku's...Raul
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Date: 2/1/2009 10:36:00 PM
Pretty self-explanitory and great by the way. My favorite form.
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Date: 2/1/2009 8:21:00 PM
Very lovely and creative, Nicely done..God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 2/1/2009 6:18:00 AM
Lets go .... rainbow .... ooops , sorry , you don't like footles , Deirdre ..... Sorry again , this really is a very clever presentation , so well done " Judy "............ Rgds. " Scarecrow "....
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