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Haiku Number 33 (Ice Blue)

Icy meander Sparkling rocks bathe under flow Depths of blue unfold For Raul Moreno's competition "Icy Cascades"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2011 8:36:00 AM

A very beautiful one here! Looks like I commented on it long ago. Luv, Andrea

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/16/2010 5:13:00 AM

Hi Deirdre. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Congratulations on your win with this superb Haiku. Eamon

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/7/2010 12:03:00 PM

Congratulations Deirdre, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

Samir Georges

Date: 3/4/2010 7:37:00 PM

Depths of blue indeed, wisely written Deirdre, a great poem to read before I shamble off to bed.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:40:00 PM

Beatiful words! LUv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:40:00 PM

oops, meant "beautiful" with a U!!

John Freeman

Date: 3/4/2010 9:47:00 AM

Congratulations on #6 Deirdre. Agape, Moses

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/3/2010 9:39:00 PM

So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Marty Owens

Date: 3/3/2010 7:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2010 5:07:00 PM

Congrats to you Deirdre on your fine poem!

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/3/2010 12:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, Deirdre! Enjoy! Peace, Audrey

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2010 12:01:00 PM

Deirdre, Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. I really love your last line in this wonderful haiku. It makes it perfect. Blessings, Connie