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Haiku Minus One

a season come and gone
mistaken thoughts and writing...
goodbye my haiku



9th Place Winner
P.D. Linda's "Any Poem This Week" contest

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Avis Bailey

Date: 2/10/2012 9:34:00 AM

Congradulations! What an honor! Bless you,Avis

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/9/2012 7:42:00 AM

Enjoyable haiku! Continue on with your verse! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/7/2012 8:05:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Carol! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2012 6:31:00 PM

this is really clever, Carol. I like it MUCHLY

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2012 12:36:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this creative work..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

George Aul

Date: 2/7/2012 12:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win in the contest......... George

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/7/2012 11:47:00 AM

Thank you P.D and everyone for your words on this poem. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2012 9:34:00 PM

Carol, congrats... on your wonderful win.. thank you for your support ;-)' always PD

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/6/2012 6:40:00 PM

Hello Carol,, I very much enjoyed this haiku ;},, have a blessed day ;}

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/6/2012 6:00:00 PM

congrats Carol on a marvelous win for this incredible write luv.. hope u are fine.. and will return soon...

David Williams

Date: 2/6/2012 11:57:00 AM

Carol congrats on your win..David

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/6/2012 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carol, love Elizabeth

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/6/2012 9:17:00 AM

Congratulation on your win, loved, bl

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/6/2012 9:12:00 AM

Congrats Carol, a fascinating writing! :)

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/6/2012 8:58:00 AM

Congratulations!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/6/2012 8:39:00 AM

aww... so sad. Please don't stop writing! congrats on your win!

Bob Quigley

Date: 2/6/2012 7:50:00 AM

Congrats on your win Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/6/2012 4:55:00 AM

Congratulations Carol x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2012 3:53:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one today..Not really sure about the interpertation so it is a very good one..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/4/2012 2:42:00 PM

come back soon Carol. we need you! harry

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/4/2012 9:19:00 AM

Truthfully I say. I mistake many times. Thanks for your inspiration got from this wonderful haiku. loved, bl

Darryl Davis

Date: 2/4/2012 1:59:00 AM

This reminds me of dark chocolate (Belgian, of course ;-) ): initially it registers as bitter on your tongue but the longer it stays, the happier you are that it did. :-)

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/4/2012 1:03:00 AM

When most poets write, they tend to look to the 'complex', trying to give their writing that 'wow' effect. That is a mistake that you didn't fall into. I write a lot of Haiku's and have fallen into that trap many times. I view this work as a way to describe 'writers block' (which we have all had), but you did it in a simple way. That was the brilliance of this write. To write a Haiku about a complex subject and do it in a simple way, takes mad talent and you have it. Excellent write. S.R

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 2/3/2012 12:04:00 PM

This is nice. I stopped writing poetry long ago coz it is ' mistaken writing' but you just continue writing the sweet haikus, please don't stop

John Rhinem

Date: 2/3/2012 11:47:00 AM

Smile ˜ And good riddens too! Thanks for the visit & you take care of youreself ˜ Love, John!:) *