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Haiku Heaven

spacial wonderment
eager appreciation

©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins
July 7, 2012

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  1. Date: 7/24/2012 11:05:00 AM
    A extermely clever use of that Asian form. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 11:18:00 AM
    The spacial wonderment is a great line - takes one into other dimensions. Love, daver

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 8:54:00 PM
    Love it...patrick

  1. Date: 7/10/2012 4:11:00 PM
    Kathy, very nice... everything 'fits'... I've tried 'Haiku' several times... without success... I cheated once by taking an already written poem and 'reformulating' some of the verses into a sequence of Haiku's which halfway 'worked' ... Anyway somes got it (you) and somes don't (me)... Terry

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:31:00 PM
    Reading a lot of haiku tonight, yours was a pleasure.

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 10:41:00 AM
    very clever haiku, my friend

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 12:43:00 PM
    ...soup mail! :)

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 8:23:00 AM
    The way that you have chosen 3- and 5- syllable words to paint your picture is remarkable. Perfect form and language. Well done, Kathryn... Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 6:33:00 AM
    ‡ I Love Fantasies * Wonderment & Appreciation But More, Sweet Anticipation * My Luv, Rachel ‡