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Haiku: Chocolate Frosting

Chocolate frosting tastes very good on a cake think I'll eat some now Copyright McCuen 2009

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James Peranteau

Date: 12/1/2010 3:18:00 PM

I agree with Sue dear poet, Haiku's; in reality lean towards the physical, heavy on emotional. This would be a Senryu to its form. And thanks for breaking my chocolate fast you mean poet ! *smiles* have a great one ! much love, james

Sue Mason

Date: 3/29/2009 2:14:00 PM

Well, allrighty then ... smile ... Haiku's are so fun and this could also be a Senryu which is the same as a haiku but are more about human doings as opposed to those about nature which are usually the haiku. Doesn't matter its got me ready to do some baking anyway ... LOL ...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/29/2009 9:41:00 AM

Laughing now, MC. My addiction to chocolate sometimes compels me just to make and eat the icing, without the cake. Dear Lord, please save me from chocoholism!

Diane Christian

Date: 3/29/2009 9:34:00 AM

mmmmmsounds yummy, I have to wait untill easterfor my chocolate, makes it even more yummier, LOL God bless you from diane thanks for all your feed back on my poetry.