Haiku 8

the gravel path glitters with sunlight-- dragonfly wings

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Edward Orozco

Date: 9/19/2015 11:58:00 AM

Nicely done. =)

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/18/2013 6:03:00 AM

I'm glad you're writing poetry about the sparkling quality of nature, which is something I always notice with great delight and sometimes write about myself. Very nice, Heather.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/10/2013 3:35:00 AM

A very nice haiku. I adore the image of dragonflies coming out when the sun is bright and warm, making the gravel path less dreary. Haiku in the traditional sense...

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/5/2013 8:35:00 PM

The sunlight in this poem truly heightened and brightened our mental senses. A true, glorious haiku. Loved! Always, Laura

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/5/2013 9:54:00 AM

I had to comment on the sun flower, just love it! you have brightened my day. Great Haiku as well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2013 8:33:00 PM

oh, this is great how the last line plays off the first two. Love it!

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/4/2013 1:27:00 PM

haiku ninja strikes again...It's a good one, Heather...it's impressive that you wrote, 'the well' as a teenager. I might have posted one or two from that time of my life on here...and I don't even like those.