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haiku 8

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haiku 8

sirens whir 
through the dark of night --
the cat's ears

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  1. Date: 9/5/2012 2:14:00 PM
    i love haiku and yours is very good

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 3:06:00 AM
    like this, Debbie i'm becoming confused, the more i read up on Haiku's the more ambiguous it becomes, different sources tend to conflict.

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 6:19:00 PM
    I miss my cat named Bilbo. You use the short poem to create vivid and memorable images here. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 5:52:00 PM
    It's nice to read a master of the art. You are an inspiration, Debbie, and thank you for the place in your contest. True story. I would love to enter your next contest but I'm afraid I won't be able to. It's harvest season in the south and I run a rice drier. Haven't slept in 39 hours but I have a moment and I intend to crash out. Gnight, Debbie. Love ya...Caleb

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 4:22:00 PM
    You miss understood me Deb...I was saying that I learned this from your foot note that this form is called Modern Haiku...that, I didn't know before and thanks for the info. I used the form before, but just mentioned it as Haiku. The name is Joy, I hate the name Joyce. One love.

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington
    Date: 9/1/2012 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tnx for visiting and comments...one love
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 3:27:00 PM
    Got it Debbie...I tend to write the modern ones too. Never thought of it as modern though...thanks for the light! One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:31:00 AM
    thank you Debbie for nice sharing,, i enjoy reading this tonight,,,:) have a great weekend..luv SK

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:16:00 AM
    Love this Debi!!!

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 8:18:00 AM
    I really enjoyed this Haiku Debbie, I believe it's one of your best Haiku that you have written as of late! Great Work!!