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haiku 4

shallow puddles
dot the battered sidewalk--
water ripples

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  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Like one I had a week or so...frankenstein came over to my house to play with my kids...and I let him. But he was playing too rough(imagine that) and I had to put him out. He threw a fit in my yard after I scolded him, and choked my neighbor to death. Heck, I don't even have neighbors...haha.

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 8:59:00 AM
    I'll bet Taiwan is awesome to see. And get ready for another wild ride if jasmine tea affects you like it does me. I'm not sure if I want to drink anymore. The dreams aren't always pleasant for me.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 12:26:00 PM
    This is really good for number four! You have created an image that feeds the imagination, so that each person fills in the rest of the picture in their own way.

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:12:00 AM
    Heather good image....David

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 4:40:00 PM
    amazing, Heather this is, one can indeed create a mind full of imagery here.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:41:00 PM
    Fantastic imagery!! Keep those haiku coming, sweetie. I am happy just to find time to get to the poets who have commented to me. I need to double the hours in every day!!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:05:00 PM
    Love this image !!!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:49:00 PM
    awe Heather, I love rain, I love the haiku. I'm picturing my feet dipping in the shallow puddles. this is some good splashing fun, if you like this imagery... enjoyed~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:25:00 AM
    Good morning Heather, you inspired me to write a poem this morning. Have a wonderful day.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 4:27:00 AM
    Good morning beautiful friend...'dot the battered sidewalk'...Nice way to start the day and why do I feel like writing a haiku all of a sudden?....Hummm, let's see here, there's gotta...

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:05:00 PM
    Very nice writing. It's quite visual. J

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:29:00 PM
    You make this style seem simple, this is one form I can't seem to get the hang of. Maybe if I keep reading yours the style might sink in.

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:20:00 PM
    Good one Heather..perfect description. BG

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:04:00 PM
    Sounds like a lovely walk in a summer shower...

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 3:25:00 PM
    Nice! Terry

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 1:26:00 PM
    We have had our share of rain this spring also but come summer we will be wanting some..Sara

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 12:41:00 PM
    It's easy to see this haiku...Great work, Heather! how you used battered to describe the sidewalk...

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 11:30:00 AM
    Enchanting! :) Let the ripples of joy spread, my dear!