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Senryu See the eagle fly Prisoner of its nature Freedom an illusion Haiku Spring, old sparrows die Fall exhausted down from sky A nest too many

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Date: 1/30/2013 6:49:00 AM
Dear Jan - Only you would say the eagle is a 'prisoner of its nature' and here I sit agreeing. Oh those updrafts. Flight is so exhausting. How does the hummingbird do it? Imagine the strength of his heart. You shine in these two like sun on a river. Kathy
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 1/31/2013 9:31:00 AM
thank you dear

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