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haiku 3

soft bergamot
permeates the morning air--
steam rises

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  1. Date: 8/6/2013 4:40:00 PM
    I am checking-out haiku 3 this time. This is a neat one for sure. Truly. I am not sure if you've noticed or even considered it(yes, I can think too much), but not too many haiku offer the olfactory atmosphere(or even auditory), usually leaning towards the visual aspects only. And here you start with olfactory, and the juxtaposition offers an addition of the visual experience, which is a great effect. P.S. -- I sent some Justin Trudeau soupmail(Down with Stephen Hitler!).

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Hey, Heather. Another great little morsel. Could you perchance have been drininkg Earl Grey tea?

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:42:00 PM
    a nice lovely image,,, deep and flowing haiku~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:06:00 PM
    Again, very good! I'm going to read the others as well before I sign off for the evening. J

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 1:22:00 AM
    lovely post dear)Charma

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 1:28:00 AM
    Nice haiku. Well said . Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 11:56:00 AM
    Nice Haiku... Terry (I think the correct spelling is "bergamot")

    Ober Avatar Heather Ober
    Date: 3/1/2013 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    OOPS! That was a dyslexic moment on my part. Thanks for catching it :)
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:50:00 PM
    I enjoy the scent of bergamont also..I have a plant called Bee Balm or Mandara or Bergamont..The leaves have a lemon scent which I enjoy..Great work describing the tea...Thanks for stopping by..Sara