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Haiku 38

blood by the pond
her reflection

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  1. Date: 7/24/2013 1:39:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 11:59:00 PM
    Thanks everyone for the feedback... it's a bit gruesome I admit, but I wanted to be different.

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 6:11:00 PM
    This is a tremendous and powerful write my friend! I truly loved each line you wrote here Timothy! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 3:58:00 PM
    WOW> this is STUNNING. BTW, my fine little friend, have you ever heard the song "we gotta get you a woman" from the 70's? By your recent remarks to things like butterfly kissing and handsies, I think you need to hear that song on youtube and tell me what you think! I just know you would be a fast learner!!

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 3:12:00 PM
    Wow, powerful, it just sort of hits you

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 1:34:00 PM
    Ah, the true colors, revealed. Excellent!

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 1:19:00 PM
    Sounds like a plot line for a murder mystery. Nice work. Great images... Jack

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 12:54:00 PM
    Ooooh man, now I'm gonna be wondering whodunit all night. Thanks for that Tim lol

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 9:39:00 AM
    Phew.. quite a dramatic Haiku--'permanent reflection'. Well defined.

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 9:01:00 AM
    Striking image Tim

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 2:52:00 AM
    Gruesome. I like. Rick