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haiku 27 28 29 about the moon

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haiku 27 28 29 about the moon

my bedroom window glows in silence alone with the moon - - - my bedroom window glows in silence full moon - - - my bedroom window glows in silence the moon and i

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  1. Date: 4/22/2013 11:17:00 AM
    The first one speaks to me. This was a good idea, I think, including differing versions. Different words speak to different people in different ways. Everyone is as unique as the many different poems.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Ok, one more :D~ As for your comment on "Lantern on the Water", yes, following our heart is definitely key to attaining true happiness. I enjoy the part of your comment were you allude to how different your life might be if you always followed your heart over reason. There is another analogy concerning the kerosene. Fire doesn't always also purifies -- part of the message is to purify our mind into a higher reason, freeing our heart into a harmonious balance of reason and heart-instinct(also belly: gut instinct).

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 12:01:00 PM
    *cont'd* -- In the 2nd line I purposefully used "we" in the hope of at least attempting to differenciate between the metaphor and humanity outside of the metaphor, because I believe that we come closer to God, within ourselves and also through other people -- you too, are a kind friend. For me, dogma doesn't offer a moral and spiritual code that wasn't already in existence before mankind invented dogma itself. The conditioned illusion is that dogma does offer something fresh, when it is really only skewered plagiarism.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 11:52:00 AM
    In reference to your comment left on my "Transcendence Tetractys", the middleman is a metaphor for religious dogma, and not man.kind(although yes, dogma was created by mankind, and mankind is an part of the oneness that is God *sigh*). I fully realize that only using 20 syllables for such a broad and contentious subject, might not be enough to properly convey my thoughts to the reader.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 11:46:00 AM
    Hullo, Charma. I am slowly making my rounds, getting back to the people who still put up me and comment on my poetry lol. This is a lovely string of moon haiku. For the classic touch, I enjoy the 2nd one. But the other two renditions are just as great in their own way. You are becoming quite the haiku artist(but you already know this).

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 6:46:00 PM
    Have to give the 7>>>>>>>

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Ok WOW, this is beautiful, i am starting to understand now. Love Terry xoxoxo a 7 <<<<<<<

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 6:40:00 AM
    I love the second one! : )

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 4:52:00 PM
    by far, Charma, my vote is on number ONE. (third one comes in second)

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 4:18:00 PM
    THIRD one!!!

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 9:35:00 AM
    You haiku series are quite interesting. There is continuity among them, a passage of time and circumstance which leads me to read "or" as "and." Nice work! Jack

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 8:57:00 PM
    Hello Charma, your poem is lovely, and as always you are amazing when it comes to haiku.. i sure love that moon... xox...pd

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 8:40:00 PM
    The first one is my favorite as well... but all are quite brilliant! We are never truly alone. The light is always there! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 3:55:00 PM
    I like all three Miss Malta. Congrats as well on the little one...TAH

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 7:30:00 AM
    I like the 1st the most. They all remind me of a song from one of my favorite bands, Opeth, called Windowpane. Have a listen to their Live version, it's quite gripping and a perfect fit to these set of Haikus. Another great job! :)

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 6:43:00 AM
    I think I like the first one best...but all of them are excellent!