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Haiku 21

sliver of time
it was now no longer
foul smell of death
Entry into "Only # 1 Poems..." Contest of: P.D...... Placed 8th Note: I feel so honored to have received the placement below from Brian Strand Entry: Short & Sweet Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand 1st Place Winner 02/15/2012

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  1. Date: 3/7/2012 9:20:00 PM
    Congrats on your win in PD's contest, Carol! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 6:26:00 AM
    Thank you . Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 8:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Carol.

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 8:26:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Carol! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 8:16:00 PM
    congrats Carol on an eloquent write and win luv.. top notch poetry ..

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 4:08:00 PM
    Wonderful piece,Carol...Congrats on your placement in PD`s contest....keep flying...

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 10:15:00 AM
    Fantastic piece of literature,Carol.Many many congratulations!Hope you are well

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 9:42:00 AM
    Congrats, Carol. Outstanding. Great job. luv and hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 7:47:00 AM
    wow............congrats...Carol..........intense .... sweet and short................~sashi

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:32:00 PM
    Kuddos on your (doble) awesome win, dear Carol! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 7:07:00 PM
    Carol,,, .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 4:55:00 AM
    short sweet and deep :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 10:11:00 AM
    very powerful. congrats~

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 9:19:00 PM
    wow, Carol, It's awesome to see this number one win in Brian's contest. Big congrats to you.

  1. Date: 2/16/2012 9:50:00 PM
    congrats Carol on first place win for this magnificent write luv.. thankxx for so many kind comments and congrats too..

  1. Date: 2/16/2012 3:42:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/16/2012 2:54:00 PM
    congrad's on your big win! light & love

  1. Date: 2/15/2012 9:55:00 PM
    Congrats on your first place win! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/15/2012 9:26:00 PM
    A powerful haiku, deserving of the 1st place win..........congrats:) Liz

  1. Date: 2/15/2012 3:40:00 PM
    Carol, another awesome poem. Congrats on winning 1st place in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe