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Haiku 17 In Solemn Adoration

incense' scent wafts amongst the silent crowd i sneeze out loud

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Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/30/2013 10:46:00 AM

Ha! one of those embarrasing yet humourous moments. Sounds familiar.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/15/2012 7:33:00 PM

beautiful - a good sensory image and humor.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/15/2012 7:32:00 PM

beautiful - a good sensory image and humor.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/13/2012 9:28:00 AM

I could imagine this happening!! :D I love the twist at the end, sweet lucky Charma :D! Send you quick soupmail! :D hugs to you sweetie! and thank you for dropping by my poems :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2012 3:51:00 PM

I love this one too. you got the juxtaposition down GOOD with this, Charma

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 5/8/2012 8:55:00 PM

Well express.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/7/2012 1:50:00 PM

:)+:) - like it - well written. - Anne-Lise

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/7/2012 1:23:00 PM

:)Well Done Charma! lol big hugs, love ya deb

Kash Poet

Date: 5/7/2012 8:25:00 AM

Another good haiku from you Charma.Enjoyed the read.