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HAIKU 16 about the butterfly

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HAIKU 16 about the butterfly

wings flutter across my left cheek a tickling smile

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  1. Date: 5/27/2013 12:20:00 AM
    Awesome! What an honor to be close to something so fleeting... always a treat to notice one... great haiku (and in the traditional sense as well!).

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 9:49:00 AM
    Excellent! You are very good at haiku

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Hi Charmaine, I like your butterflies too. This one is so light and happy. Thanks for the info about Malta; I found it all quite interesting.

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 3:32:00 AM
    Hi Charma, stopping by to wish you a happy good night.. nice haiku~ LUV*PD

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 1:53:00 PM
    You are tickling my chubby cheeks here, Charma! And I think he landed on my eyelashes too!...What a great aha moment for a haiku! Luv, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 11:44:00 AM
    nice one sweetie! SOUP MAIL Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 3:50:00 PM
    what an awesome image. I love this , Charma

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 8:56:00 PM
    ha.hah nice.

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 10:21:00 AM
    and smiles as I read this! I love the thought of that butterfly tickling your cheek! ^_^! How are you lovely lucky Charma? Shucks, I am so sorry I missed greeting you on your birthday :(! It was on May 1? Allow me to send you belated birthday wishes, love and hugs!! Better late than never right? I am sure you had a wonderful birthday and continue being the bright light that you are-- I wish you more love and health :D!! Smiles and love to you!!

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 12:00:00 PM
    Smile ˜ I Am Listening Unto Shania Twain's Song Right Now, 'Forever & For Always,' My Dear Precious, Priceless & Beautiful Charmaine * Sssssh, Don't Tell Anyone This But, I Think I Am Deeply In Love With Beautiful Carrie Richards; Even Though I Know She's Married * Maybe Its Just Her Beauties Amazing Poetry I Fell In Love With? Sssssh * Thank You, Dear Beautiful Cinderella, For Your Precious Kind Visit * My Love To You, Forever; John!:) ˜

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  1. Date: 5/7/2012 9:50:00 AM
    Ahhhhhhhhhh! So cute! Beautiful! I <3 it! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 8:44:00 AM
    A delight to read this happy haiku! Lovely!

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 8:24:00 AM
    Wow!Very nice Charma!!

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 7:10:00 AM
    I can just see the scene..Enjoyed..Sara