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haiku 16

a rangoli pattern 
in a Mumbai courtyard --
oil lamps flicker

*Mumbai /m?m'ba?/, also known as Bombay, is the capital city 
of the Indian state of Maharashtra. 


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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:04:00 PM
    Debbie,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 6:40:00 AM
    Mumbai is the Commercial Capital of India.Previously it was known as Bombay.Nice capture of image of Dewali in this haiku Debi.

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:10:00 PM
    debs, I tried to insert the picture in "about this poem" and It wouldn't work for me. I don't understand this stuff or I'd do it!

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:58:00 PM
    Hi Debbie, now I know what a rangoli pattern is. Great write. Rollo

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:41:00 PM
    I don't know rangoli or mumbai, but they sound mideastern! Love that last line.