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haiku 10

brooding clouds
suffocate the sunset--
lightning flickers

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  1. Date: 5/8/2013 10:14:00 AM
    A very nice haiku Heather... Well done ~A.O

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Such a vivid image is left in my mind. I feel an intense connection with nature. Fantastic haiku. My first fav poem! cheers

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 1:47:00 PM
    Ominous but lush little haiku, Heather. I really like the contrast between the brooding clouds (which I see as slow and looming) and the swift camera flash of the lighting.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 7:24:00 AM
    Is that the flicker of lightning...or the flicker of haiku ninja's blade?...;)

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 9:19:00 PM are amazing! Lovely haiku!

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 7:13:00 PM
    Me too.....another great one

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    Date: 4/24/2013 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ditto Andrea that is...about being on my favorite list
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 3:15:00 PM
    what great imagery this has, Heather. I love when you remind me why I have you on my fave poets' list.

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 2:22:00 PM
    Well, it looks like I will have to be the first person to comment on this haiku. I wonder if people will copy my words or say the same thing. Your picture here is bigger than life. A powerful thunderstorm threatens. I like this poem and the picture it evokes. It is rather hard for me to identify the feeling that went into this poem, but I can definitely sense feeling. I think that is what makes haiku good.