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haiku 10

the frog sits
beside the cat's water bowl--
a jay swoops

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  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:46:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 2:44:00 AM
    good imagery debbie. if titled, you can call it "Food Chain".(LOL) thanks. check me out;

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 12:02:00 PM
    Hi! friend, enjoyed your nice imagination. I have replaced 'a fly' with 'a man' and 'district' with 'the world', pl. read again. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 2:46:00 PM
    Now I wonder who the jay took with it...hpmmm...the frog or the cat? great imagery here. Love it. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 8:03:00 PM
    You still have it' the action i love'

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 3:16:00 PM
    Yep, the contest is over, but I was just wondering how it could have been a proper haiku moment - maybe something like: smiling children pick the large pink flowers - - i sneeze? Thanks for all your help and advice, Debs. I must log off now x

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 3:03:00 PM
    wonderful imagery, Deb. I recently posted a haiku too. I hope it is written as nicely as yours. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 2:40:00 PM
    clever haiku, Debs. I never did think of anything satisfactory for the hayfever/blossoms haiku. Any suggestions? (for me to learn for next time, I mean). I'm still wracking my brain...