Gun Salute

gun salute~
                                           in every fold of the flag
                                                   his sacrifices

funeralsoldierhaiku

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/18/2013 2:58:00 AM

Kash I never went to Your "my poems" page... what I keep saying all this time is I shared MY own "My poems" page. I don't/can't have access to your page unless I know your password, which of course I don't. What I have been saying there is Anybody at all who shares their Own "my poems" page, by FB, email, it somehow gets reflected on EVERY souper's "my poem" page. That's my observation anyhow. I hope TPS has addressed your concerns about this. My observations are the best I can do to explain.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2013 4:32:00 PM

Kash, I do believe I am just now seeing my favorite one of all as I proceed down the list. Congrats, my friend.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/26/2013 10:24:00 AM

Many congratulations on your number 1 Kash xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/26/2013 9:34:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, very good imagery! congrad's Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/25/2013 11:28:00 PM

Very well said Kash. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/25/2013 11:03:00 PM

Many congrats Kash for this well deserved win

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2013 9:01:00 PM

Kash, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/25/2013 8:03:00 PM

Kash. This was an extraordinary haiku power-from the heart of a patriot! It stirred my soul...can't tell u how many times I read this one and wondered who the author was!! Ta Dah! It was you..Applause for this excellent piece, friend! gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/21/2013 3:42:00 PM

Go Kash..a haiku! yes! and on topic..who's the man! Light & Love

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/21/2013 6:48:00 AM

Absolutely fabolous kash

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/19/2013 7:06:00 PM

No matter what colors it flies, or for which country it may stand for ... the same holds true. A tribute in a short form. Nicely done, Kash.

Kathryn Collins

Date: 1/19/2013 10:36:00 AM

so chilling a tribute to those who died for us.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/19/2013 4:17:00 AM

amazing poetry

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/18/2013 2:38:00 PM

wow that hits home Kash...Seren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2013 1:44:00 PM

Very good work about the death and funeral honoring a soldier..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always appreciated..Sara

Terry O'Leary

Date: 1/18/2013 1:04:00 PM

Another superb Haiku, Kash... I'm sure you wil do well in the contest... Terry

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/18/2013 11:36:00 AM

This is an incredible rendition of a perfect poem for the contest! I just loved reading this enlightening and remarkable write this afternoon! What a beautiful and gorgeous piece, Great Work!!

David Williams

Date: 1/18/2013 9:01:00 AM

Kash, another first class write, very well done...David

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/18/2013 8:55:00 AM

I'd call this a short tribute for it is not tiny in voice.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2013 8:38:00 AM

this is very good, Kash. I wish I could come up with an original idea, but nothing is coming to me. As for your recent comment to me. That Winter Illusion was not for any contest. Can you tell me which contest you thought it was meant for!! I need to enter a contest. haha.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/18/2013 8:07:00 AM

A tiny tribute from me to those GREAT soldiers~~~