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Gully Washer's Whooossshhhhh

Grumble-rumble raises hairs on my arms. Air so crisp it crackles lightening forms. Whoop the wind scrambles and mell pells, the stationary earth shivers before it fells. Scrubbed clean like a naughty, naughty, child, the twigs and brush scatter, the cat's beguiled. Cone flowers pink petals lap dance the lawn. Gray chittering squirrels hide 'tween rooted forms. Whhhhhoooooosh the gully washer's display, the sizzling pop of the auto’s fine splay. The gutters are gargeling spitting a flume, and, ah the relief from heat such a boon. Mother nature in all her majesty has made the day just right for me!

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Date: 7/23/2011 1:18:00 PM
very interesting one, Debs, so clever. a belated congrats on this cute poem.
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Date: 7/19/2011 2:04:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d.,debbie
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Date: 7/19/2011 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on you rwin. Lee
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Date: 7/19/2011 11:49:00 AM
My congrats to you, Debs : )
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:00:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie on your win in P.D.'s contest "Only (Nature) Allowed". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2011 1:14:00 AM
Awesome! Congrats on your first place win.
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Date: 7/19/2011 12:21:00 AM
congrats on your win Debbie, david
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Date: 7/18/2011 9:44:00 PM
Well written Debbie. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:35:00 PM
like your style Debbie ..congrats on a big first place win with this ultimate piece on Nature .. luv the sound effects in words..oh wow..and thankxx so much for my 3rd place in your contest just now too.. I luv that poem I entered cause I luv the song that inspired it..so many thankxx luv..
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Date: 7/25/2010 4:42:00 PM
Lovely poem Deborah. You know I wouldn't roast someone's poem. Hope you like my sonnet, I haven't tried many of these. Check you soup mail. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/23/2010 12:32:00 AM
SO much imagery. And what an inventive line: pink flowers that lap dance a lawn!! Good one, Deb. Luv and goodnight. Andrea
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Date: 7/21/2010 10:23:00 AM
Not only one of my favourite poets, but also one of favourite poems. Speechless, always amazed by your writing. Love, Sami.
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Date: 7/20/2010 8:03:00 AM
Wow a fav! I'm happy now you MUST read Michelle's The Storm!
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Date: 7/20/2010 6:16:00 AM
This one goes to my favs Deb. I truly enjoyed the read. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2010 6:10:00 PM
nicely penned!! sounds like a good storm!
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Date: 7/19/2010 8:54:00 AM
Excellent work that has descripiveness bringing me there with you...I am glad that you were inspired by Michelle to write this one...Sara
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Date: 7/19/2010 8:28:00 AM
wonderful D.G., by the way , I challenge you to,, ,,,not to a slam,, but to enter my contest..i love your Adger E.Poe.. poem,..p.d.
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