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Guidance of Neon Lights

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Guidance of Neon Lights

Loss cuts like a knife
Where you once were silence grows
The city halo beckons
While the breath of death
Lingers right beneath my skin
Tempting glow of fate calls me

Start over again
Without you, yet without dread
Lighting my heart once again
City of Angels
Leading me back to hope, life
Let you go, a new hello

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  1. Date: 7/14/2011 8:31:00 PM
    Very nice, Shani. Congrats on your win in the contest.

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 2:34:00 PM
    Shani, I don't even know how a sedoka works, but your message here is filled with vivid lines that are eerie, and your ending is strong. Congratulations on your win~!

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 11:21:00 AM
    Congrats Shani on such a moving write! It's sad but you also speak of hope here, very nice :D

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 11:12:00 AM
    It really is hard to take another stab at life once you have been hurt, Shani. I could feel your pain and was happy to see that you are being led back to hope again in the end. Excellent Poem! Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 5:06:00 AM
    Congratulations Shani on your win in the "Assignment" contest of P.D. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 5:05:00 AM
    Congrats Shani on your fantastic win with this dazzling assignment luv.. kudos on meeting the challenge .. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 4:09:00 AM
    My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Shani

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 12:51:00 AM
    shani..swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 12:50:00 AM
    S.B., ,Congratulations on a poem well done! Thank you for supporting my contest~ I sure enjoyed every entry,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 1:37:00 PM
    I love this moving yet optimistic piece, Shani

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 4:15:00 AM
    very well put toghter and very powerfull and words that impact as all

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 2:25:00 PM
    Enjoyed your work this afternoon..Sara

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 1:41:00 PM
    oh, just fascinating, shani.... well-scribed! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 12:30:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Shani. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 10:17:00 AM
    I enjoyed the expressions a-flowing, Shani

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 8:54:00 PM
    Cool title for this one .Very fitting, Shani. Me likes!