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Growing Pains

pain is growth it is a process of life P.S. NO ONE WANTS TO EXPERIENCE PAIN BUT IT BRINGS STRENGTH

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Dawn Kilby

Date: 10/23/2008 8:33:00 AM

you're right. with pain comes truth and revelations. we all must experience it to become wiser and stronger. i know i have. i love haiku and you penned it well. :P

Sara Lokken

Date: 10/14/2008 6:46:00 PM

True....but I often have wondered what, if there is ever that final straw, happens when the heart is beyond any further endurance... anyway I guess it's all a process of soul, a path we're given. Beautiful haiku. Love, Sara

Heidie Buys

Date: 10/11/2008 7:53:00 AM

So very true, life prunes us so we can send out stronger shoots and produce better fruit. Good one. Love Heidie

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 10/10/2008 11:46:00 AM

You can't have flowers without the rain. God Bless, D-nyce. Vince

Brian Strand

Date: 10/9/2008 11:32:00 PM

Simple truths in your work D-nyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome observations

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/9/2008 5:48:00 PM

wait till you turn forty it gets worse.john

Michael Torres

Date: 10/9/2008 3:26:00 PM

Very true. Nice write. Gods blessings and love to you Michael

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/9/2008 3:36:00 AM

Yes, you said it. Pain is how we learn; rise; and gain the will needed to gain heaven. Well said, my friend, Kristin

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 10/8/2008 4:53:00 PM

Dear Deneen! What an exhaustive comment you have written eulogizing my poem Wink of Eyes. You have seen beyond the meaning of words used. In fact your comment is a poetry written on a poetry. Remarkable. I am indebted to you sooooo much! I have read your Haiku Growing Pains and felt the depth of the pain that inspired it. Indeed pain brings strength. It is a loyal friend. It does not desert you. This is what I pointed to in my poem Magician and Aladin's wonderful lamp. God Bless you! -Mohammad