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Ground Dead

foolish be he man standing under, sitting above tree leaf falls and says: you again? life not long, but you no roots to grave ... what type of fortune; coins not gold? for you to toss in slots not made: foolish man be he laughing? smiles of white words in shadows; they cascade fortune none all thoughts one my mind complete the story made last leaf sails upon the ground the green now mostly brown: foolish man! what story made? young hands are wrinkled now not much joy in a life just sitting..in the ground

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/7/2012 8:46:00 AM
Jessica; This is a very nice poem about a foolisl man. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 9/8/2012 3:35:00 AM
foolish is the man who may, ego driven, self fancies hey, though just a mortal drip, engorged but nondescript, self esteem soon fades away...
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Date: 5/2/2012 1:32:00 AM
Jessica foolish man indeed..David
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Date: 5/1/2012 11:10:00 PM
Smile ˜ Hi Baby, Tis Good To See Your Beauty Again * Foolish Man, Foolish Spirits, & Most All Is Vanity ˜ My Love, Not You Baby ˜ Forever, John!:) ˜
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