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Grief of Betrayal

Oh summer’s love flown
gone with the swallows on wing,
life now insipid
when warmth torn out of one’s heart
like the pending storm; freezes.

© Harry J Horsman 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/4/2013 9:17:00 PM
A nice win Harry, congrats......... SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2013 8:24:00 AM
splendid write....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 4:54:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, harry
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Date: 10/1/2013 2:54:00 PM
Arresting discriptions in this write Harry, How are you these days?
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Date: 10/1/2013 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations harry, another wonderful piece from you xx
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Date: 9/24/2013 2:08:00 PM
At least the needles of the great chill can keep us awake to the magnificent struggle towards liberty - J.A.B. %
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Date: 9/21/2013 2:55:00 PM
this morning i woke up like a teen ager.with new hopes in someone else. how long will that last?
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Date: 9/21/2013 2:22:00 PM
So deep this is..Describing so well the coldness and pain of being deceived.
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Date: 9/21/2013 10:49:00 AM
Betrayal hurts. great poem. Is it for the contest? If it is - good luck.... Lucilla
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Date: 9/18/2013 1:50:00 PM
this is penetratingly sad to think about, not only summer going , but never let the warmth be torn from ones heart I am sure that will never happen xx xx
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Date: 9/18/2013 1:19:00 PM
Very deep my sweet friend. It's a silent betrayal, cool volcano so freezes. Excellent expression with deep imagination. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/18/2013 9:31:00 AM
Good day Harry. wow.. now's deep,,, and betrayal... thanks for sharing you lovely comment this morning.. :-)..Linda
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