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Green Wave

a wave of green carrying me away to a land of hope a place with just peace the green wave flowing along the tough hill screaming the impossible I will kill the soft leaves running on the face of rocks changing every unpleasant view green carries welfare,true the green wave running through me planting harmony with earth what a lovely view, what a dreamy place! inspired by: http://ajaytao2010.wordpress.com/2013/04/08/maravian-field-marek-kiedrowski/#comment-17502

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Date: 2/15/2016 3:18:00 PM
yassmin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2015 1:30:00 AM
Hi Yassmin, a wonderful poem to read. SKAT
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Date: 9/18/2013 9:45:00 AM
Beautifully done Yassmin! I like how you said 'just peace', it brings out more than just calmness, it shows serenity. Very well penned!
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Date: 4/15/2013 12:36:00 AM
To contemplate the beauty is to find peace. Lovely Yassmin.
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Date: 4/10/2013 10:52:00 AM
- A nice poem to read Yassmin, like it very much. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yassmin Elnazer
Date: 4/10/2013 6:21:00 PM
glad you liked it,I loved your poems to:)

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