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Greatest Day Remembered

I asked her to marry me with a poem
I formed the words out of love, with passion
I had written it with awesome rhythm
I asked her to marry me with a poem
I know we're not on the bottom totem
I held her tight, gave her some compassion
I asked her to marry me with a poem
I formed the words out of love, with passion

Russell Sivey

For Dan Kearley's " One Of Your Greatest days " contest


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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 1:33:00 AM
    Dear Russel, Congratulations on YOUR Winning POEM "Greatest Day Remembered" in the Contest "One of YOUR Greatest Days" Sponsored by Dan Kearley. A Well Deserved Win. I proposed to my Wife in POEM 42+ years ago. Superb Pen. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 6:18:00 PM
    Congratulations Russell....Donna

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:30:00 PM
    Hi Russell, your poem is just beautiful, what a lovely way and day! Congratulations with your amazing poem, always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Hey Russell. I keep seeing you on poems I review...thought I'd check you out...triolet...very nice!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:28:00 PM
    Very romantic and lovely Russell.....

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:09:00 PM
    Wonderful poem Russell. An exceptional way to propose to the one you love. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 11:42:00 AM
    Russell; if this is the way you did it - it's awesome. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:14:00 AM
    what a sweet way to remember your sweetie!!! This is adorable.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:57:00 AM
    Ways differ and vary when it comes to proposals.... Managing this in a Poem is surely a bright way for a poet to charge his proposal with enigmatic words! Lovely write, Russell!