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Great Pyramids of Giza

The pyramids have made me ponder Sprouting tall in sands of timeless plunder They raise the palms, of either hand Among the eighth, of wonderlands I'll hold a constellation of small conclusions While coming forth with wise solutions The Sphinx, she taunts me, with ancient riddles Of mere coincidence, or majestic plan The likeness climbs the vulnerable mind Comparisons of any kind Rival all of Mother Nature To look about the infrastructure If it fails to quiet me with sure decision What my eyes acknowledge Must bear no burden of proof It is simply there, exempt from time No moorings hold it to past or future Overlooking River Nile I smile and ponder why and how There is delight in the wonder of obscurity A purity in never knowing A culture keen in keeping mystery ______________________ For PD's Contest: Epic Mysterious

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Date: 7/25/2013 2:17:00 PM
Carrie, wow....... congrats *****SKAT
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Date: 7/24/2013 8:55:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the wonderful win. :-) Epic, it is. <3 always & forever <3 ''LINDA
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Date: 5/2/2013 9:48:00 PM
It does intrigue us,,how they did it,,how long it took. I would love to visit the site. For now this poem will serve my needs. Nice, indeed! RAY
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Date: 5/2/2013 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie ...loved this so much...
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Date: 4/27/2013 3:44:00 AM
Wow! I love this. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/26/2013 9:31:00 PM
Hi Carrie, thank you for the wonderful poem and stunning imagery in my "7 wonders of the world contest." CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for the support. Take Care & Good Night ;-) ~LINDA
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Date: 4/26/2013 8:30:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Love the taunting Sphinx!
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Date: 4/26/2013 8:19:00 PM
Carrie, congrats with your 7 wonder poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2013 6:59:00 PM
Excellent poem on the wonder of the Great Pyramids of Giza, Carrie, congratulations
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Date: 4/26/2013 12:55:00 PM
Stunning Carrie...congratulations
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Date: 4/19/2013 5:58:00 AM
Awesome for the contest! I entered too, but its not nearly as good as this!
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Date: 4/12/2013 11:40:00 AM
Absolutely there my there... I think I can try my luck now... yes!~A.O
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Date: 4/9/2013 2:50:00 PM
Carrie, just as I would expect from you, you turned the challenge into one of amazing poetry. THIS is how I would want people writing about the wonders of the world if I were doing a contest like this one. You really paint the essence of the pyramids with this.
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Date: 4/9/2013 2:49:00 PM
I have to tell you, poor Sookie is no more. She got taken to the animal shelter last year. Sadly. I fear she was not adopted. Let me see this poem now.
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Date: 4/5/2013 9:38:00 PM
Wonderful Carrie...good luck..Donna
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Date: 4/5/2013 7:30:00 PM
You are in a historical mood. I too am fascinated by this culture. Another excellent poem.
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