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Great Ideas

GREAT IDEAS

 Great ideas are put to bed

 Because fears and doubts invade your head

 Time does fly, you wonder why

 Those great ideas have passed you by

 The greatest philosophers, they have said

 We become what’s in our head

 What we think is how we act

 Thoughts determine our lives exact

 It’s all in you, imagination

 Positive thoughts, a great sensation

 Why don’t you start a brand new fashion

 Live your life with belief and passion

 Kick those doubts and fears away

 And you will create a brighter day

 For you are a shining star

 Act on great thoughts and you’ll go far

 When you know this, it’s plain to see

 Your thoughts suppress

 Or set you free!


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Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/1/2010 9:43:00 AM

It’s another Gem of a Poem my friend Beautiful on thoughts and words with a melody of its own, which shines from the beginning till end. Great write and lovely expressions. Thank you for your ever precious comments on my poem Patradoot or the Messenger. Love and best wishes........Ravindra .......Simone Seagal

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/20/2010 4:18:00 PM

Enjoyed this poetry from you today and will read more, please check out my recent Criminals part 4 and remember its only a story. Have a great day.

Earle Brown

Date: 7/17/2010 2:03:00 AM

Very inspiring! Nice write.

David Byrne

Date: 6/24/2010 8:04:00 PM

good reminder that most of what's around us is the expression of a collection of ideas ; everything concrete is simply an idea! Perhaps the universe is simply an idea?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/18/2010 9:46:00 AM

Believe it or not this poem is a very good idea, and I ebjoyed every line. My #1 line would be the one where you state all them ideas we pass by. Sure find myself passing lots of them. Enjoyed your poem, have yourself a nice one,..Sidney LeeAnn