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Hi, grandpa it's me again!
Your dentures sit in an open glass
Do you remember the tears grandma sang before she passed?
The way she looked into your eyes, 
Moments before she said her goodbyes
Grandpa, I found a note from grandma, she doesn't want you to cry.

Hi grandpa, it’s me again!
The rocking chair is old and dusty
Do you remember the way grandma sat me on her lap?
Read many stories before I took a nap
How she enjoyed brushing my hair with her hands
Love the way she rocked me to sleep every night until I grew. 

Hello, grandpa!
I stored your hearing aid away
Do you remember that special musical box in grandma's drawer? 
I opened it last night, to watch the ballerina dance
I wish you could hear the tiny chimes grandma lived in
I hope you don’t mind, I’m keeping grandmothers favorite scarf.

Hello, Grandpa!
I'm caressing grandma’s picture frame
Do you like the way she looked in that pretty sundress?
Grandpa, I miss the things grandmother did for you
I like the walking stick she handcrafted, the day your needed support
It kept you in balance every time we took long hikes in the woods.

Hello grandpa, it's me again! 
Here I sit holding your hand
I have no more tears
Soon you will see grandma
Please tell her hi, and I know you will be there the day I die
Bye, grandpa
Give grandma a kiss, and tell her I miss her

By; PD

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  1. Date: 6/23/2015 12:30:00 AM
    coming back to this one of yours. It really is superb. Love when you write this way, PD. Is it hotter than the devil there in Texas? we had such hot days that our power went off two days in a row, apparently for people overusing their AC!

  1. Date: 6/7/2015 12:05:00 AM
    I love this// Comment By: Mari M.

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    Date: 6/7/2015 12:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PS... my daughter wanted to comment my poem, so I let her, she's only 9. LOL, my little future PD
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 1:51:00 PM
    The prose, so soft and gentle, brought tears to my eyes. How I miss my grandparents so...thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 7/16/2014 8:27:00 PM
    I like this. It has something special in it for everyone. If only we could go back and say what we wanted to say but didn't. Regards, Colin.

  1. Date: 5/20/2014 6:52:00 AM
    This touched me deeply. I saw myself watching over you as you visited your grandpa. I felt what you weren't saying. I saw what you didn't show... I was torn between the three of you, grandpa, grandma and yourself... I will be mulling over my grandparents and the loss there. I still haven't gotten over the loss of my parents... Great write! PR

  1. Date: 5/1/2014 8:40:00 AM
    Brought tears to my eyes ! Made me think of how my grandfather used to hug me and tell me to be a good man when I grow up. And I honestly try to live up to that wish. Enjoyed reading it very much.

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 7:45:00 AM
    Very interesting theme and nice take on it. congrats on the win, pd

  1. Date: 2/8/2014 11:35:00 AM
    Very touching Linda. Nice you got to know your grandparents. I only met the one grandma. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/7/2014 12:14:00 AM
    Congrats Linda for your winning with this great work.

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 1:11:00 AM
    that was sad and moving. :( peace

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    Date: 2/9/2014 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    why did you leave without telling us? :( all your poems are gone. :(
  1. Date: 12/18/2013 12:31:00 PM
    What a touching poem! Loved this one. :)

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 7:19:00 PM
    Linda You did a great job tugging at my heartstrings. This is a lovely and sweet write. I can feel the dedication and care falling from your heart onto the page. Nice job my friend

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 5:51:00 PM
    Of course, I can't leave this wonderful page not to read once again this very lovely, sweet, touching and heartfelt poem of yours. Embracing & loving it once again & u. Have a great & lovely day. I'll be posting a new poem. I hope u will go & read it if you've time. Thank u so much for everything again. love much, 4evr sis & bff,Leonora

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 5:44:00 PM
    Coming back to say TYSM for another win in your contest & for liking my poem. Yes my dearest sis, the sides of stone mountains of Petra are architectural- magnificently carved. By d way I dropped by @ soup early a.m. before going to schl yest. but when I was about to enter my messages to u my internet signal eventually dropped. I was in a hurry to schl so, I wasn’t able to send. Ok, talk to u again later. I’m done w/ the f. verse. I’m not sure if it’s ok w/ u. Sending it later & some queries for clarification about it ,ok. ;)))))). Hugs, hugs & more hugs. Tcare always! Lovem4evrLeo

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 8:27:00 AM
    I Looove this poem... brings back memories of my own grandfather who passed over a decade ago.... thank u for sharing.... *Shaz*

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 10:28:00 AM
    Hello Thank you for the warm welcomed.I am getting used to this sight, still new to me. I enjoyed reading Summer's Eve - Grandpa - and I am Woman. You are a very gifted writer. Grandpa touched my heart. I will look into submitting something to your contest. Thank you for the invite. Jen

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 6:14:00 PM
    This is so sad a write it almost mad me cry, it's so expressive and such a loving emotional poem it's absolutely beautiful, and it's true we'll all meet up on the other side with those we love.

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 4:08:00 PM
    Hi mi Linda...A heartfelt write...Reminds me of one I wrote about a year ago called"A grandpa morning" I'll have to post it soon...Strange how we write about similar things.Hmmm :-) Yours, Ken...

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 3:16:00 AM
    You have such beautiful memories of your grandma, a beautiful poem, but so sad, I felt the loneliness from grandpa, as he continues life without grand ma, your sadness in saying bye bye to grandpa, , love is eternal, and they will be together for eternity, blessings to you, and brought back memories of my grand mother, blessings sueellen

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 12:46:00 PM
    I love this , you are clearing , very Talented . your Grandmother is proud and watching you with content ! I would be very proud of you , Love Yvette