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Grains of Wet Whimsy

grains of wet whimsy collapse in cascades of froth... summer memories

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2010 7:32:00 PM

HelloGerard, how are you stoping by to enjoy your poem and wish you a happy x- mass and a wonderful new year,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/20/2010 8:47:00 AM

Yes so true are your lines and in parallel to the football season .. u are correct.. the debacle was awful to the eyes and stunned was every fan in my home and all around town... they are still a Wild Card but if they mess up Coughlin will be gone .. ESPN said as much today... Cower back in the coaching race too... Miami, Houston, Giants.. I am picking the Falcons.. the Jets are good at times.. but... who do u like in S.B. luv..??

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/12/2010 3:50:00 AM

Good one that says so much in three short lines..The metaphors are great..Your kind comments on my work made my morning lighter..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 12/11/2010 6:43:00 PM

Yep for sure summer is gone Gerard. Nice Haiku, and good luck if for a contest. Thanks so much for your graceful comment on my work.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/11/2010 6:05:00 PM

ohhhhh this is yummy! I mean so viseral just like a haiku should be I can smell the sea and taste the salt! (One heck of a flattering comment you left for me, kind sir!) Light & Love from the Mutual Admiration Society

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 6:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Gerard in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 10:09:00 PM

Congratuations, Gerard, this one I would have given better than an hm! Luv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 8:56:00 PM

Congratulations Gerard on this well deserved HM win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:48:00 PM

Congrats Gerard my friend on your HM in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry luv... enjoy a special honor and victory tonight with luv.. so who u got tonight PATS or JETS....???

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:39:00 AM

Congratulations Gerard on your success with this worthy poem. Agape. Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:26:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved Hm win in the contest of skat, gerard

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:46:00 PM

GERARD~CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR HM! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/3/2010 8:29:00 AM

Wonderful images you have penned so well, Gerard

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/3/2010 8:28:00 AM

oh how sweet Gerard.. how sad also.. luv your perfect title for this contest..good luck my friend.. well the game last night did NOT go my way but still some games left to play and hope my GIANTS rise to the call and overpower those boo birds...luv.. happy football watching and happy weekend my friend.. with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/3/2010 8:15:00 AM

Can't help but think of the fun last summer at the water park while reading this haiku, Gerard. Now that winter is here, we'll only see flakes of frozen whimsey. A memorable haiku, my talented friend. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2010 8:18:00 PM

wow, this is just awesome, Gerard. I sure love summers!!!