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Grafting a Possibilty

Beginning from stone rough corpus scion branches, genetic vineyard...

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/8/2010 4:50:00 PM

Wonderful thought well expressed with apt images, jay

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2010 3:00:00 PM

The scion is from royality..Interesting work..Glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Hope that you evening is filled with exciting possibilities..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/8/2010 1:12:00 PM

Very nice, Jay! Am I correct in assuming these branches come from grapes? After the vineyard grape bushes was destroyed by fire in the movie "A Walk through the Clouds," they found a live branch on one bush and used it to recreate their special crop. It had a unique taste, so describing such a branch as a "genetic vineyard" seems appropriate. Excellent senryu! Love, Carolyn