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Graceful Descent

Palm holds “Old Man's” face, eyes are closed resigned to fate. His FIRST fall is LAST! For Decending Grace contest

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Date: 9/26/2015 12:03:00 PM

A gem

Date: 9/26/2015 7:08:00 AM

Nicely done, I see this was a winner and now featured on the homepage. Grats.

Date: 4/23/2010 6:01:00 PM

Congratulations John on a well deserved Win. agape, Moses

Date: 4/23/2010 12:57:00 PM

interesting imagery very free......Light & Love & congrad's

Date: 4/23/2010 12:13:00 PM

Interesting perspective on the picture. Congratulations on your third place finish in Raul's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen

Date: 4/23/2010 7:14:00 AM

congratulations on win great last line summed it up well

Date: 4/23/2010 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest JT. Love, Carol

Date: 4/23/2010 6:16:00 AM

Congrats John on your winning poem in the contest... wonderful words for the photo and enjoy this victory..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Date: 4/23/2010 6:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Jeralynn

Date: 4/23/2010 12:37:00 AM

Nice work !!! Congrats~~~~Rick

Date: 4/22/2010 11:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, John! This haiku is terrific. Love, Carolyn

Date: 4/22/2010 11:15:00 PM

John, congratulations on placing 3rd in my contest...Raul

Date: 4/22/2010 11:11:00 PM

A fine haiku with nice images