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Below is the poem entitled GRACEFUL DESCENT which was written by poet John Trusty. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Palm holds “Old Man's” face,
eyes are closed resigned to fate.
His FIRST fall is LAST!

For Decending Grace contest

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  1. Date: 4/23/2010 6:01:00 PM
    Congratulations John on a well deserved Win. agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 12:57:00 PM
    interesting imagery very free......Light & Love & congrad's

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 12:13:00 PM
    Interesting perspective on the picture. Congratulations on your third place finish in Raul's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 7:14:00 AM
    congratulations on win great last line summed it up well

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 6:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest JT. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 6:16:00 AM
    Congrats John on your winning poem in the contest... wonderful words for the photo and enjoy this victory..luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 6:06:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win! Jeralynn

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 12:37:00 AM
    Nice work !!! Congrats~~~~Rick

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 11:28:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, John! This haiku is terrific. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 11:15:00 PM
    John, congratulations on placing 3rd in my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 11:11:00 PM
    A fine haiku with nice images