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Below is the poem entitled GOTHIC VAMPIRE- HUNTER which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Hunter of duskfall prowls with sensation The craving of thirst awakens mortal lure Enchanted by taste of flesh, a night’s potion His shadow rises upon needs impure. Enticing one prey, he offers sinful blessing To consume blood’s feast, the sweetness of nectar Another creature now part of the Hunter’s ring; Both enshrined by moonlight’s conniving star. Consumed by earthy hunger, fangs devour As seasons feed on eternity’s quest, Not knowing the woman of morning hour Or sunrise’s flavor, gently possessed. He wanders again scouring for luscious bite Transcending centuries gothic and old Slow lament of own death, a rabid plight Enough! His knifed heart spurts, his wish bestowed. Poems From The Vampire Contest by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 12/8/2013 7:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win nette xx

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 4:51:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, nette

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 12:54:00 AM
    I'm AFRAID of you! Bev

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 3:25:00 PM
    I really loved this poem, Nette! It is romantic and gothic, and sad. I can feel the pain of immortality from the vampire's point of view. An excellent poem for this contest! I wish you the best of luck!...Thank you for the wonderful comments on my latest poem! I appreciate it very much!

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 10:24:00 AM
    Bloody beautiful! Nette! Jimbo

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 7:11:00 AM
    Another incredible poem from your pen. You weave a magical spell with your words that pulls the reader into your world. Amazing

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 5:28:00 AM
    Excellent. Exceptional write. Good story. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:33:00 PM
    This is a wondrously awesome and tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! You surely have written a unique piece, I loved this exceptional poem! What a lovely vampire should know by now I like stories of vampires...they fascinate me, Great Work

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 3:51:00 PM
    Excellent write Nette., almost makes me believe in Vampires and stuff. Hope it is a win for you....peter

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 11:46:00 AM
    Reads like a winner..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 11:43:00 AM
    It's dark, intense and gothic. This flows with shades of seduction and rhymes with perfection. Love how it ended; who wants to live for centuries?... Bright poem!

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 11:42:00 AM
    I feel the power in this write, exceptional piece.

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 11:39:00 AM
    - I see those nasty creatures ..... Wish they could eat: red, juicy apples ... :))) - Wishing you good luck in contest Nette. - Have a happy weekend!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 11:02:00 AM
    Mysteries of night consumed by an enigma endured an eternity! Sensational!

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:21:00 AM
    Refreshing throwback to the worn-out vampire tale. I like this old-world feel and a vampire's wish to end his term of eternity. You did the impossible! Thank you also for the award in your contest.