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Below is the poem entitled goodnight which was written by poet liam mcdaid. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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         golden enchantingly beautiful
      falling down the setting sun
 into the  distant horizon
    glowing out in  a darkening sky
        a sigh breathing

her last breath
  daylight upon the mountains
       glistens in her shadows
            dancing gold ripples 
              upon the shadowed surface

       darkness swallows daylight
  singing to the oncoming night
relinguishing her throne
        making way for the stars
           winking in the Heaven's
              rocking gently 

                side to side
                  on a smiling moon
 the eclipse
    married in heaven's
        when the sun
           kisses the moon
golden silvery beautiful

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 5:23:00 PM
    How beautifully romantic!...I wish I could write poetry as brilliantly as you do....The final verse really reminded me of the Percy Shelley poem, "Love's Philosophy"....I really enjoyed this one, Liam!

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 6:58:00 PM
    Impeccable!!! That's what comes to mind.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/3/2013 2:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you deeply my old friend appreciated deeply
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 2:33:00 PM
    When the sun kisses the moon..How more romantic than that can it get..Another beauty..Extremely romantic..a rocking goodnight in moonlight's cradle Goodnight!!!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/2/2013 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i will draw for you my lady a light from the soul shining towards you light lighting up the sun smiles to you beautiful thank you heartfelt
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Hola Liam, Poesia romantica mi amigo... Ken

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/2/2013 1:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 11:35:00 AM
    - A poem that was enjoyable to read Liam, beautiful and sweet! - oxox // Anne-Lise:)

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/2/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    anne lise thank you for the sweet and very beautiful comment deeply appreciated