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Goodnight

golden enchantingly beautiful falling down the setting sun into the distant horizon glowing out in a darkening sky a sigh breathing her last breath daylight upon the mountains glistens in her shadows dancing gold ripples upon the shadowed surface darkness swallows daylight singing to the oncoming night relinguishing her throne making way for the stars winking in the Heaven's rocking gently side to side on a smiling moon the eclipse married in heaven's when the sun kisses the moon golden silvery beautiful goodnight

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Date: 9/3/2013 5:23:00 PM
How beautifully romantic!...I wish I could write poetry as brilliantly as you do....The final verse really reminded me of the Percy Shelley poem, "Love's Philosophy"....I really enjoyed this one, Liam!
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Date: 9/2/2013 6:58:00 PM
Impeccable!!! That's what comes to mind.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/3/2013 2:44:00 AM
thank you deeply my old friend appreciated deeply
Date: 9/2/2013 2:33:00 PM
When the sun kisses the moon..How more romantic than that can it get..Another beauty..Extremely romantic..a rocking goodnight in moonlight's cradle Goodnight!!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/2/2013 2:53:00 PM
i will draw for you my lady a light from the soul shining towards you light lighting up the sun smiles to you beautiful thank you heartfelt
Date: 9/2/2013 1:43:00 PM
Hola Liam, Poesia romantica mi amigo... Ken
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/2/2013 1:54:00 PM
DRAWING FROM THE SUNS WARMTH LIKE YOU BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/2/2013 11:35:00 AM
- A poem that was enjoyable to read Liam, beautiful and sweet! - oxox // Anne-Lise:)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/2/2013 12:30:00 PM
anne lise thank you for the sweet and very beautiful comment deeply appreciated

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