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What I ask, is more than you can give, a small simple task, and a reward you'll receive. As the most few days, may be our last, let's make it count, with no worry or doubt. So come one, come all, join me as we count, the last days few, to whole days new, But on that day, history would be repeated, to remember that moment, and a friendship I'll miss, a passionate, soft, loving kiss. To spend a small moment, with someone so dear, is like an eternity, where our love is to bear. 'Cause you and i, is my equation for happiness, my solution to love, my escape from sadness, and a gift from above.

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Date: 12/2/2024 7:11:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/3/2016 11:07:00 PM
Daniel, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2016 12:03:00 PM
Daniel, enjoyed reading your poem... HUGS * SKAT *
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Date: 6/11/2010 1:25:00 PM
This is excellent and flows well. The last stanza is the icing on the cake. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/10/2010 5:50:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/10/2010 1:05:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Daniel. Keep it up. Love, Destiny
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Date: 6/10/2010 12:39:00 PM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this afternoon Daniel. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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