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Below is the poem entitled Goodbye? which was written by poet Daniel Wiggle. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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What I ask,
is more than you can give,
a small simple task,
and a reward you'll receive.

As the most few days,
may be our last,
let's make it count,
with no worry or doubt.

So come one, come all,
join me as we count,
the last days few,
to whole days new,

But on that day,
history would be repeated,
to remember that moment,
and a friendship I'll miss,
a passionate, soft, loving kiss.

To spend a small moment,
with someone so dear,
is like an eternity,
where our love is to bear.

'Cause you and i,
is my equation for happiness,
my solution to love,
my escape from sadness,
and a gift from above.

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  1. Date: 6/11/2010 1:25:00 PM
    This is excellent and flows well. The last stanza is the icing on the cake. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 5:50:00 PM
    Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 1:05:00 PM
    A wonderful poem, Daniel. Keep it up. Love, Destiny

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 12:39:00 PM
    It was a pleasure to read your poetry this afternoon Daniel. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol