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Good Morning

I open my window not a worry or care I refresh my mind with the crisp morn air Run down the stairs to grab a quick bite On this special day full of love and light My love and I are about to be wed In a few hours time to the Church we'll head Good morning I beam, my bridesmaid appears With a glass of champagne bubbling with tears She takes out my veil and dress of brocade My silver necklet and ear rings hand made A ring at the doorbell, I rush out to peer Good morning, good morning, my driver is here Bouquets of flowers full of lavender scent Button holes, presents and so much well meant No cloud in the sky and the birds full of song Good morning, good morning I'm singing along A little church gleams in the snug of the hill My groom waits inside to say"yes I will" My whole world is filled with hope and with dreams I walk up the isle, then he gazes and beams. For Francine Robert's competition Good Morning

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Date: 1/27/2011 7:59:00 PM
Wow, a wedding day as well. This is just wonderful. Congratulations, Deirdre.
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:13:00 PM
I'm so happy to see you won this one, Deirdre. I had not read it before and I really like it. Paints a wonderful picture. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/23/2011 6:18:00 PM
What an exciting, beautiful morning!! Congratulations on your win! hugs, kris
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Date: 1/23/2011 2:23:00 PM
And you have this wonderful verse to revisit that special day over and over. Congrad's on your fine win! Light & Love
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations Deirdre on your win in Francine's contest. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:34:00 AM
Beautiful, delightful write, Deirdre! Filled with lovely images to carry with you through the years! Congratulations on you wonderful 2nd Place win in the contest! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2011 5:26:00 AM
Hi Deirdre - Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deirdre in the "Good Morning" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:30:00 PM
lovely entry, congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest Deirdre
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:46:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, deirdre
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:36:00 PM
Now thats what I call a good morning. Congrats to you on your big win. BG
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:29:00 PM
How lovely and who needs a win after such a good morning. But never the less congratulations for a great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:15:00 PM
Deirdre, Congratulations on your big win in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2011 2:47:00 PM
Congrats Deirdre on your big win in the Good Morning contest with this excellent entry .. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/20/2011 10:56:00 AM
Hello Deidre, This is such a beautiful poem, I got all teared up, reminded me of my Daughters wedding. Well done hon As Always, Shar
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Date: 1/20/2011 9:42:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Deirdre. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:38:00 AM
Oh my.....this is the happiest poem I've read in a long time!! love it !!! good luck in the contest....it cheered my day!!
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:33:00 AM
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