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Good Morning

Birds sing their waking Silence dead and gone Aurora rays pierce the sky Resurrected dawn Sunlight drips to your lashes Slides down to your nose Your eyes glow in the early light like a morning rose.

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Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 1:54:00 PM

Alyssa, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Sue Mason

Date: 4/27/2009 3:47:00 PM

From a feature of the week (3/15) to a "first round survivor" ... smile ... great job, Alyssa. Congratulations and good luck in the contest!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/10/2009 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Alyssa. Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 4/4/2009 9:53:00 PM

congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke

Elaine George

Date: 4/1/2009 7:58:00 PM

Dear Heart! I am so happy to see this wonderful poem in the Semi-finals. Best wishes to you in the final round. Lainie

Heidie Buys

Date: 3/30/2009 3:11:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through and best wishes for the final round. Well done. Love Heidie

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/19/2009 10:01:00 AM

Congratulations Alyssa on your lyric "Good Morning" being featured. God Bless. Vince

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 3/17/2009 3:57:00 PM

Very nicely said what a quiet reflection, Congratulations on your lovely featured poem! Laura :)

Robin Maughan

Date: 3/17/2009 11:20:00 AM

Awesome!!Congrats on your feature!! Poetry is such wonderful therapy!! Great write, Love, Robin

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 3/17/2009 9:51:00 AM

Wonderful poem! Love the imagery! Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy~

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/16/2009 5:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/16/2009 5:24:00 PM

"Aurora rays pierce the sky"- absolutely beautiful! Congratulations on being featured this week with this wonderful write. You are so gifted, the imagery here is spectacular! Smiles from Lolita(btw, thank you for your kind comments on my writing I am honored)

C. E. Mcmullin

Date: 3/16/2009 5:07:00 PM

Congrates on the featured write this week, and one for my favorites file. I love the imagery and the way it flows along to a warm conclusion; Well done, Alyssa- poet butterfly

Date: 3/15/2009 4:16:00 PM

What a beautiful reflection! Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Sue Mason

Date: 3/15/2009 12:54:00 PM

Beautiful write here, Alyssa and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations!

Elaine George

Date: 12/17/2008 3:59:00 AM

Dear Alyssa, You have etched this beautiful, tender moment in time forever in my mind. Elaine

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/1/2008 11:02:00 PM

beautiful poem and well written, thank you for sharing.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/27/2008 5:12:00 PM

Very beautiful poem. Enjoyed the read.

Alyssa Finley

Date: 11/26/2008 8:32:00 AM

"his" face, more like...

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/26/2008 7:41:00 AM

What a beautiful little poem. This is so sweet, and I can picture the sunlight coming down over her face. Just lovely! ~ Carrie

John Rhinem

Date: 11/26/2008 2:05:00 AM

Beautiful!:)--"Hello Precious & Gifted Alyssa Finley!"--How are you young lady? Well I hope! What a very pretty & lovely write that you put together here dear~Filled with a lot of the tenderness of your heart & soul I do believe~Smile, I loved it!--So,"You Have A Very Beautiful Day Today, And Love To All You Love, John!"~Bye Young Lady:)