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Good Day

To control these thoughts and write with precision 
With each verse flowing sweetly down the page
Seems an adventure into the unknown world of 
Dictionary tease!!

A daisy chain of words and phrases joined together
in a disjointed series of seemingly nothingness
placed now around the neck of you, dear Souper,
Eyes adorned

Constraints of quiet time and space are often
the culprits of lack of creativities ability to show
verse that makes some kind of sense to some
but not all

That this soul wishes to write beautiful controlled 
poetry is an understatement.  Words spilling now
from mind to fingers in an attempt to simply say
Good Day!!

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  1. Date: 7/5/2012 2:51:00 PM
    Good day, bad day, and all the ones between. You never know just what you'll write and what the words will mean. The plinking of the keys begin or the hand begins to write. I guess that's why it's called a gift when words come into sight. I think it's nice, you rack your brain, just trying to say hello. To share with us your kind regards here at the big soup bowl. Soup Mail

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 12:24:00 PM
    When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Debra. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 12:19:00 PM
    I agree Deb. We all long to take some words and string them together in a unique way to thrill and inspire other poets. This really says it all. Good Job. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 7:06:00 AM
    Strong women and strong poem - wery good Debra.oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 8:33:00 PM
    poets are special souls and these lines have captured their essence of creating compositions to share Debra.. lovely write..luv..

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:30:00 PM
    Deb, right on and a perfect way to say good day!

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 11:32:00 AM
    Great write Debra! So many of us on here can definitely relate. Have a good day:)

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 11:18:00 AM
    A strong and very nice poem you`ve written here Debra.Enjoyed it to the fullest! Have a great day yourself:)

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 9:52:00 AM
    this flowing piece makes my day, debra... sunny, beautiful images!.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 7:19:00 PM
    Debra this was enjoyable and 1 to pop back and look at again , have a nice day Hugs Declan xx

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 11:48:00 AM
    Enjoyed your poem, Debra. I can truly relate to your third stanza. So much busyness and noise makes creativity difficult at times. God Bless. Love, Kim