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Golden Wings

Night time ends it’s reign of terror
animals come out to play
the bite is taken off the winters chill
the song birds greet the day
sleep is rubbed from morning eyes
hot coffee fills the air
a stillness almost holy
a quiet soft and rare
as the morning glows to red
the song bird really sings
to welcome the sun as it crests the horizon
on it’s golden wings.

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  1. Date: 2/25/2010 12:24:00 PM
    Trudy, this is a very captivating read throughout. Loved the imagery my friend, Thank you for sharing the read. Many Blessings, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 1/9/2010 7:15:00 AM
    Beautiful stuff here, Trudy...I love poems that describe the simple pleasures of life. 'a stillness almost holy' it! - Tim

  1. Date: 12/29/2009 5:14:00 PM
    beautiful poem, I hope you are better. I can't imagine what you have been through. A prayer for you--Jesus, comfort and strenghten dear Trudy and her husband, bless their life cituation, in your name. amen.

  1. Date: 12/10/2009 4:56:00 PM
    wow.. a beautiful piece of poetry you have here... have a great night. :)

  1. Date: 12/10/2009 1:49:00 PM
    Lovely. And I miss you here. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/9/2009 8:52:00 AM
    You have penned a lovely poem, I can almost hear the bird songs in the morning air. Your poetry is awesome. And thank you so much for your comment on my poem, the vintage jacket

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 10:18:00 AM
    Trudy, Where have you been? We want more poems... please! You write so well. Please share! Lovingly, Dane Ann (soup mail)

  1. Date: 11/27/2009 9:13:00 AM
    Congrats on your Lessons poem being featured this week.. truly beautiful and nice tribute to your Dad... I too was extremely close to both my parents, now passed on, but Daddy's little girl I will always be.. u can read A Loving Family parts 1 and 2 for better insight.. of my connection with my Daddy... thankxxx Trudy Diane for sharing this lovely Lesson on this Monday... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 11/20/2009 11:46:00 AM
    Vivid images are painted in my mind with this one, dear Trudy. Thank you for sharing.Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 11/18/2009 4:18:00 PM
    Just lovely! I've missed your writing! and YOU. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/18/2009 6:56:00 AM
    This is so lovely. I have just returned from a holiday in Scotland and it was brilliant; the coffe was great and the migrating birds, outstanding. Thanks for the very nice comments you made about my poem. Robert

  1. Date: 11/14/2009 4:50:00 AM
    Incredible piece, I loved the vivid description written here. Keep writing, I'll keep riding. Love, Sami.

  1. Date: 11/4/2009 9:06:00 AM
    nicely penned!!

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 3:34:00 PM
    Reads like a lullaby ... great imagery here. Would make a wonderful book for a child ... smile ... just excellent, Trudy. Thanks for being at the Soup !!

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 4:13:00 AM
    This is such a lovely Rhyme, Trudy! The early morning is my favorite time of day. I can smell the coffee! Great imagery and I love the title! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 4:42:00 PM
    lovely very lovely!!! see soup Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 4:32:00 PM
    Nicely done write very descriptive. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 6:37:00 PM
    I thought this was a lovely read. Well written. Pam.

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 2:01:00 PM
    I read this 3 times through and now i feel like i have wings

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 11:46:00 AM
    Trudy, this is a ~~Magnificent~~ piece. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol