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golden rain

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golden rain

sweetly surrendering
to you my dream
paradise smiles golden
in a rising sun 
clouds upon 
the sky
weeping raindrops
of happiness 

a stream
bursting forth
from deep within
the mountain
carried upon air
whispering babbles
flowing water
caressing feelings
emotions move
the river bed

flowing to
the ocean
waves crashing
unfurling greeting blue
swelling with joy
kissing the sands
in golden
happiness falling
into paradise

it settled
with you
oh beauty 
from within deep
queen of 
the ocean
salt of 
the sea

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  1. Date: 11/1/2013 3:02:00 PM
    Beautiful poem from a beautiful and inspired heart..I enjoyed reading your work.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 10:20:00 AM
    Heartwarmingly brilliant!

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:23:00 PM
    Beautiful words, your play of words are beautiful to read...Thanks Liam...Peter

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 7:55:00 PM
    beautifully penned poem here....your poems always captivate :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 5:02:00 PM
    Just beautiful..the prince of romance strikes again

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 4:57:00 PM
    I love your dreams Liam, they are golden as you are, when are we going to partner up again, hopefully soon? xxx

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Hi Liam, Great romantic stuff here my friend.. Ken