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Golden Rain

sweetly surrendering to you my dream paradise smiles golden in a rising sun clouds upon the sky weeping raindrops of happiness a stream bursting forth from deep within the mountain carried upon air whispering babbles flowing water caressing feelings emotions move the river bed flowing to the ocean waves crashing unfurling greeting blue swelling with joy kissing the sands in golden happiness falling into paradise it settled with you oh beauty from within deep queen of the ocean salt of the sea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/1/2013 3:02:00 PM
Beautiful poem from a beautiful and inspired heart..I enjoyed reading your work.
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Date: 10/30/2013 10:20:00 AM
Heartwarmingly brilliant!
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Date: 10/29/2013 7:55:00 PM
beautifully penned poem here....your poems always captivate :)
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Date: 10/29/2013 5:02:00 PM
Just beautiful..the prince of romance strikes again
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Date: 10/29/2013 4:39:00 PM
Hi Liam, Great romantic stuff here my friend.. Ken
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