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Golden eggs and harps

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Golden eggs and harps

(Triple Tetractys)

so quickly
I was amazed.
The fog lifted, to reveal a painting
like an artist's imagined fairy tale.
A sea of cloud
a new
and forests,
in the heavens.
I found myself looking for the beanstalk!

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  1. Date: 12/4/2008 2:38:00 PM
    I really love this poem as I often imagine worlds in fantastic places. The beanstalk reference is just wonderful! ~Juliane

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 5:13:00 PM
    What a creative poem. Nice use of imagery. I like the visual effect too. Keep up the good writing. Karen

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 9:55:00 AM
    Great job Sir Nigel! Totally enjoy this read and form. Thanks for your comments on my piece. Chris.

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 9:45:00 AM
    So clever, Jack!..This is a new form for me. I like it! BG

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 8:20:00 AM
    Wonderfully written! Love the imagry! Thank you for your comments on my featured poem "Laughter of A Friend" also!

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 6:04:00 AM
    Nigel this is very clever. Wonderful form used here. Nice write, really enjoyed. God 's blessing's to you and your family.Michael

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 5:58:00 AM
    This is amazing, my favorite friend! You are so inspiring. I would have never thought of this. Hope you find the bean stalk. Hey, maybe its in never land! Love your friend, Tink

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 5:34:00 AM
    Enchanting Nigel. As so it must be where you live. Love the last line. You paint a beautiful picture and add a touch of magic. Perfect. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 4:45:00 AM
    Brian , is correct , Nigel , you do have a talent for a great variety of writing forms .....

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 4:32:00 AM
    A beautiful image, and love that surprise ending. :) As for your comment on my haiku, the modern haiku can have any number of syllables per line, as long as the total count does not exceed 17, as the haiku in its original tongue, needs a count of more syllables to effectivly portray the thought, where as in the english language, we need less syllables for the desired effect, so say the haiku Gods. :) Love, Kristin

  1. Date: 11/25/2008 4:07:00 AM
    Nice one Nigel,you hve a great talent for a variety of forms.Rgds Brian Thanks for your welcome comments.