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Going Halloween Haiku Crazy

howling through tombstones winds evoke resurrection spirits of those passed ‘neath the orange moon cackling heard above the gale witch flies through dark skies bats make their descent terrify trick or treaters candy corn scattered good, bad and ugly creatures of All Hallows Eve prance ‘cross leaf-strewn lawns *Entry for PD’s “Going Halloween Haiku Crazy” contest. By Carolyn Devonshire, October 10, 2011

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2011 8:20:00 PM

I like how yours seemed more like actual haiku, Carolyn. congrats on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/31/2011 10:02:00 PM

Congratulations on the win with this fine poem, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/31/2011 2:02:00 PM

Well done Carolyn. I couldn't get inspired for this one. I have never been much for Halloween since I couldn't celebrate it as a child. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/31/2011 9:41:00 AM

Congrats LNC...hated to see the candy corn wasted! lol...hope all in well with you...much love. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/31/2011 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Halloween Haiku" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/31/2011 3:57:00 AM

Your vocabulary usage is extraordinary, Carolyn! The image of freaked out trick or treaters with their candy corn flying everywhere is awesome! Congrats on this winner. Amazed again! Gwendolen

Bob Quigley

Date: 10/30/2011 10:32:00 PM

These are really great Carolyn. Congratulations on your Halloween Haiku win

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 10/15/2011 9:21:00 AM

That is a Heapin' Helping of HalloweenY Hi-Chewy Haiku-ies!

Jack Horne

Date: 10/11/2011 11:52:00 AM

LOL, love the descriptions - great fun : )

Kash Poet

Date: 10/11/2011 5:11:00 AM

Very good Halloween haiku here Carolyn.Best wishes.

Nancy Jones

Date: 10/10/2011 10:38:00 PM

yep, you pegged it for me... this is zactly what 'twas like when me big ones were wee ones and we did it together. thanks for the pranciful memories! ~N

Cory Long

Date: 10/10/2011 9:30:00 PM

ooooo spooky with all the fixings for a great Halloween night.. loved it!! good luck in the contest.. free spirit

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/10/2011 8:39:00 PM

Oh Carolyn, you have written a stupendous write! I think the overall wind is a great way to put the Haiku all together...I love the way you have done that!! You'll do well in the contest!!