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Going Down

The pressure is building up like a volcano bubbling
My heart and my mind I can't keep on juggling
What is right and what is not to become of us
Is as uncertain as the way the wind blows dust
It started out so grand, things were so splendid
Against all of the odds our love we defended
But as the years past, our love turned to hate
The simplest phrase soon started a big debate
The fighting and yelling that is so commonplace
Our problems and issues we could never face
In the sea of love we were just bobbing around
Because our ship of trust had finally gone down

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