Gogyohka

time, that unrepentant thief steals the roses from my cheeks leaving wrinkles in their place my only recourse is to turn mirrors to the wall.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 5:50:00 PM

Joyce, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/9/2012 1:52:00 AM

Congratulations on another well deserved win Joyce xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2012 10:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/7/2012 9:44:00 PM

This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Joyce.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 11/7/2012 5:17:00 PM

Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2012 4:08:00 PM

wow, another awesome one on the winners' list. I am loving these.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/27/2012 10:31:00 AM

But Joyce, look at your wonderful poetry, surely time is proving an asset, it certainly has brighten soup up...

Kash Poet

Date: 10/26/2012 8:04:00 PM

Yes Time is such a thief.Enjoyed your poem very much Joyce.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2012 9:48:00 AM

Cute one..Got a chuckle..It is hard adjusting to the facts of aging isn't it..Enjoyed reading this one..If for a contest, sure to be in the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/25/2012 7:57:00 AM

i can so relate to this one! well said, joyce!

Patricia Ellis

Date: 10/25/2012 3:13:00 AM

I am quite sure that you have aged beautifully. Love your poem.