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He asked what I was going to do with my life My thoughts ran like a wild hog from Pakastaine I wanted to take my time pacing my answer in strife I had already seen the world understand Already been through college I was no longer interested in playing with the band Life, long and lean wisdoms hardly seen So many stories as I am slowly growing old Already been through Nasa and left them green What in this world would make me happier My conscious already have been deemed I took his hand and explained like a fien I didn't know yet simple as it could be

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Date: 7/26/2013 8:06:00 AM
There are a couple of spelling errors on here: "College", "Conscious", etc. That said, it's kind that one would ask you what you want to become of yourself. Most can care less...this was a good, reflective piece. :)
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Date: 8/14/2013 6:28:00 PM
corrected thank you Drake
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Courtney Courtney
Date: 8/11/2013 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Drake nice to hear from you again

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