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GLOOPITY GLOOPS

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GLOOPITY GLOOPS

Porridge is ploppy' broth is real thin.. 
However this true 'soup of poetry' fills things up to the brim..
I'll admit its sometimes murky... yet its flavours real strong...'
its long on warm welcomes to whoever jumps in'
It can be hot at the bottom and bubbly on top;
I hope that your senses can take in a lot.
There’s lumps in the mixture that can challenge your swallow;
But if you stick with your portion you'll see how it beats imitators hollow.
I've hit a few snags.. I'll admit there are trials,
Yet the Judges aren't for 'hanging'
(I mean they make decisions sometimes) L O L... 
Now I don't put that in verses, well I hadn't till now
It  probably won't Rhyme, but it’s to late anyhow,
Now just where was I? Oh yes you must try,
And keep 'a circulating or you might boil the pot dry.'
I've been trapped in the bubbles that might be silly to you
But the old silly-bubbles do get me in a stew,
If you bite down on one, and you hear a slight ahh!
It’s either a soft or a hard one, now you may not be sure,
Like the egg and the chicken... That got squashed by a car;
It can be quite academic, if you make it that far, 
and if that does happen,
That you travel that road,
A nice plump 'foul' wouldn’t hurt ,if its in the brew throwed
If the egg isn't seen, I don't give a dang.! 
Pop that bird in the pot, that'll be just the thang....

©Joe Maverick 30-11-2013

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  1. Date: 2/9/2014 12:18:00 PM
    Hey when did I write I was in a bar fight? hahahaha

    Maverick Avatar Joe Maverick
    Date: 2/9/2014 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey that's an unfair answer..' makes me wonder who has had such an effect on ya'
  1. Date: 1/6/2014 2:33:00 AM
    The first line and the title did make me laugh !! Hmm....... Interesting topic :D

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 1:14:00 PM
    You put the fowl in the soup bowl with this piece Joe..lol.. enjoyed

    Maverick Avatar Joe Maverick
    Date: 1/20/2014 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I wonder...' should you have put foul Joseph.? yes that would be fun.!!
  1. Date: 12/18/2013 4:18:00 PM
    LOL, enjoying this one again, Joe

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 2:13:00 PM
    Joe, you made me giggle with this one. Love the title too ;)

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 3:50:00 PM
    Prodigious..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visits..Sara

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 1:09:00 PM
    Bluurp.' gurgle bloop..! Wheew was that muurky Just had to come up for air..' I hope i got those Judges placated alright, just in caseion they do gett a hanging notion, and I..I wouldn't like to get them thinking 'bout me in that kinda way, noo sirr'ee now if i was a famous painter like pistaschio or even that charismatico i could suffer a whole load of hangings, yours Joe..)

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 6:07:00 PM
    oh my, this is funny, unique and creative, JOe. I sure enjoyed it. I see you did more than one newer poem, so I will save the other for another time to read!! Luv, andrea