Give Peace a Chance

Everything in this world deserves a chance to live,
                      but in the real world some would rather take then give.
                                             GIVE PEACE A CHANCE

                          Too many innocent angels have been taken away,
                        then more innocent are left to wonder why and pray.
                                             GIVE PEACE A CHANCE

                           What makes some people think they are better then me,
                                  God created us all equal and his son set us free.
                                             GIVE PEACE A CHANCE

                            Children are killing children there is no excuse,
                               and it is never right to say I win,you lose.
                                             GIVE PEACE A CHANCE

                            We will never understand the evil that we see,
                           when there is no difference between you and me.
                                             GIVE PEACE A CHANCE

                             I pray that one day we can dance the same dance,
                                            but until that day comes,
                                             GIVE PEACE A CHANCE




                             written June 10,2013 for Give Peace a Chance contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 12/25/2015 10:48:00 PM
Hope you are well these days, Colleen, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/17/2013 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win, Colleen
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Date: 11/17/2013 3:53:00 PM
Hello, my awesome friend Colleen, hope you are welll. Congratulation, Thank you for the fine win..... Sending hugs: -) Thank you for the support. always~ LINDA
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Date: 7/26/2013 7:44:00 PM
Hi collen....Amazing write,,,, beautiful encouraging words we all need to hear thankyou for sharing...:0) cherie...
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Date: 7/7/2013 10:42:00 AM
Colleen, another wonderful winning poem.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. LOVE LOVE * Linda
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Date: 7/3/2013 8:12:00 PM
Echoes the iconical song. Nice work! Peace & Love Matthew Ansih
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Date: 7/2/2013 6:54:00 AM
Colleen I so agree with your fine write. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/2/2013 6:38:00 AM
Yes! Way to go Colleen. Excellent poem and win. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:47:00 PM
Colleen, congratulations with your winning poem, in Nathan's one of your best poems. *SKAT*
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:23:00 PM
thanks nate
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Date: 6/29/2013 12:00:00 AM
Good night Colleen
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Date: 6/28/2013 2:55:00 PM
Dear Colleen, This is a great Poem. Did you win? You should have. A Soupmail about Harry(HG) coming soon Respectfully Flipper
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Date: 6/27/2013 3:52:00 PM
remove the first GPAC's and it will be better. BTW I accidentally deleted my winning poem from PD's contest. would you have a copy of the original. I tried to write a new one but couldn't get it all. john
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Date: 6/24/2013 6:53:00 AM
Good morning, I hope your strength is increasing.
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Date: 6/22/2013 6:39:00 AM
Good morning Colleen. You are in my prayers today.
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Date: 6/21/2013 3:59:00 AM
your wonderful words resound even after reading this..
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Date: 6/19/2013 2:01:00 PM
Hi Colleen, thank you for the smile, i am thinking of a poem at the moment... love... ME
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Date: 6/17/2013 8:55:00 PM
Don't wish to dissapoint, new poem also added to my poem Bad Girl. I hope you enjoy both.
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Date: 6/16/2013 6:16:00 PM
OKAY FOUND IT... :-)
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Date: 6/16/2013 5:51:00 PM
Hi Colleen check out my latest, it is appropriate that you be the first to respond. I have dedicated it to you
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Date: 6/16/2013 12:28:00 PM
I think you did an excellent job on this one. You win top marks from me.
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Date: 6/15/2013 8:17:00 PM
sorry it didn't place, sweetie. This is one I should have tried to do but I just couldn't think what to say. I commend you for doing this poem. It seems like it should be an easy topic but you truly have to think it out, how to put a new spin on it! You had a lot of good to say. Just love that last stanza about us all dancing the same dance one day.
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Date: 6/15/2013 7:42:00 PM
Nice setting to that famous saying! Have you ever been to Strawberry Fileds in NYC? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/15/2013 2:12:00 PM
this is very nice, Colleen. It's good to know who this is. I scrolled down and saw it was you!!
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Date: 6/15/2013 10:10:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this timely work..That is what the world needs..Thanks for stopping by Gail's blog..I appreciate the condolences..Cody's dad died after a long bout with Huntington's Disease or Huntington's Chorea..Sara
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